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Great ‘poem from a note’, Gary. I love how it just spins on a sixpence and everything falls apart. You have a knack for throwing the reader under a bus full of torment!

“Songs turn to scream, / a scythe pierces the clouds / and shreds the sky's curtain, / flames rise from the ground.”

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That’s just brilliance💙💙💙loved it 💙*People burn, bones burst out of chests a cackle is heard and all is chaos* Wow that’s wonderful💙

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