Soaring
I originally produced this piece in a note. A couple of people suggested that I publish it as a piece, so here it is.
It sprung from one of the MLYF note chains, and so credit to Cedric for the first line:
Gargantuan greenery,
a precursor to silver sands,
the landscapes over which I soar,
forever changing
as is the sky itself
Clear skies become blotted,
light clouds turn heavier, granite grey
my path disrupted by rain and hail
causing me to re-route.
Nearer warm grounds, I see
smiling faces, hear voices
that sing, free and innocent
in total harmony.
Until they're not.
Songs turn to scream,
a scythe pierces the clouds
and shreds the sky's curtain,
flames rise from the ground.
People burn,
bones burst out of chests
a cackle is heard
and all is chaos.
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Great ‘poem from a note’, Gary. I love how it just spins on a sixpence and everything falls apart. You have a knack for throwing the reader under a bus full of torment!
“Songs turn to scream, / a scythe pierces the clouds / and shreds the sky's curtain, / flames rise from the ground.”
That’s just brilliance💙💙💙loved it 💙*People burn, bones burst out of chests a cackle is heard and all is chaos* Wow that’s wonderful💙